1/6 Page Ad (2005)
The latest version of the 1/6 th page ad. The previous versons can still be found by clicking here.

I made a few text changes in the second image. In the first line, I removed Hardwood to save space. Also, later you mention that you cary other types of wood as well, so I thought it wasn't needed. In the second paragraph, "selected Imported Hardwoods" reads akwardly to me. I changed it to read "select Imported Hardwoods" instead. This implies that the Harwoods are of a supierior quality, and reads more smoothly. Finally, in the last paragraph you used "The" in front of "SMALL to Medium size". Using "The" makes the sentance singular instead of plural, so to be gramatically correct, you'd need to drop the S on shops. Or, you could change the line to read "SMALL to MEDIUM sized CABINET SHOPS!"

That's all just some input based on how it read to me. Feel free to take it or leave it.